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legends of dacot (youngsters:adventure, 3150 words) | |||
Author: poetrydiva | Added: Jul 29 2003 | Views/Reads: 4779/2839 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
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Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story crowd of children. “You there!” the Namer called ”you, boy, the one with manure on his boots!“ the man called out to the boy, “Do you want a name or not?” Broken from his thoughts, the boy looked around to see who had gotten named. But every one was looking at HIM. He realized as he looked at the Namer, who was by now giving him dirty looks, the man had called him. The boy ran to the front and looked at the man not knowing what to expect. The boy began to ask the Namer a something, but he stoped him. No words are ever spoken by the named. The Namer dark seemingly unemotional eyes searched him from head to toe, as if trying to find something to name him after. He couldn't seem to find anything to call this boy that smelled like a horse. Then it dawned on him, Horse! But not in this tongue, the man thought, having a sudden spurt of creativity he rarely experienced, the ancient tongue of Dacot. Smile on his face, the Namer said only one word. “Meirach!” The boy, now known as Meirach, had his name at last. Giddy with pride and love for his new name, completely oblivious to the meaning, he almost hugged the man. But was quickly carried off the platform and pushed away. Not wanting to cause a scene, Meirach ran home with a smile of unadulterated bliss. Waltzing into his father's small shack, which he called home he couldn't seem to stop dancing. Seeing the joy on his son's round face made him think of the boys mother, Calara, peace be with her. “Well, son. What is it? What am I to call my boy now?” he asked the boy, “Well, come on now, out with it!” Meirach stopped dancing to the music he still heard in his head. “Meirach. My name is Meirach,” the boy said in a voice so full of pride it brought tears to his fathers eyes. “Well, that's a nice name, did they tell you what it meant?” Said Trieod, the boy's father. “No I didn't ask, I thought I would burst if I opened my mouth, do you know what it means?” the boy said with an expectant smile. ”No I don't, m' boy. But you had better get some sleep, supper'll be ready in the 'our“he said to his only child. Meirach walked to the bundle of hay he called a mattress. He hadn't even realized how tired he was until his father had mentioned it. He was asleep before his head hit the fur on his pillow. He dreamt of his long dead mother. She was smiling, with the sun in her auburn hair and the breeze blowing her favorite blue-gray dress around her, she looked like a goddess. Then the winds got stronger and the breeze turned into a storm, his mother was swept away from him. He woke with tears in his dark eyes. He wiped them away before his father saw him crying; he wouldn't like that. He walked to the table that separated their mattresses and sat at his chair. Waiting for his supper, he looked around the room. He saw things that had surrounded him his entire life. The loom his mother had used tossed off in the corner covered with dust. His fathers working tools, he was a trench-man, the shovel and spade. His own things; toys tossed aside over the years, a book of the holy teachings, and his fathers large hay mattress. A jolt of the table woke him from his daydreams. “Well then, Meirach, here's your supper, you've got chores to do. The block mastah was here earlier, says you didn't finish 'em.“ The said with a desperate glance. “I'm supposin' you've got a good reason, so I'm not goin' to ask. It had better not happen again, got it?” Meirach looked up from his small meal of salted potatoes and a strip of dried chimtny root. He had completely forgotten about his chores! “Got it, da', I'm right on it,” he said. Gulping the last sip of xatha from his goblet. He ran from the shack to the stables. On his way to the stables he danced and sang to himself. The people still out working or drinking xatha saw him and smiled remembering their own naming. Suddenly tired Meirach stopped dancing and walked calmly still smiling to the world. He chased some dogs away from a dead rat on the side of the road stopping to inspect the decaying animal as only a boy could. Remembering his work he rushed for the Stables. Turning the corner to the entrance he stopped to look in a shops window. Noticing it was a woman's undergarment shop he had chosen to look in on, he blushed furiously, glad no one had seen, making sure not to look into any other shop windows, he ran to The Stables. Finally at the Stables, Meirach got to work scrubbing and feeding the horses. Cleaning out the manure and chasing away the rats and hay mice that occupied the hay loft. Swearing to himself as he noticed a blister developing on his thumb, from the fork used to scoop the hay, while he was rubbing Berta down. It was almost morning when he finished so Meirach didn't bother to go home. Falling asleep in the Stables next to Berta he had a peaceful slumber, stirring occasionally from the cold. Waking at dawn, to early to work on an empty stomach, he stumbled back to his home still groggy from his sleep. Walked through the door to find his father already gone to work. It seemed a bit odd to Meirach, considering he had stayed out all night. And that his father was never eager to go to the trenches that surrounded to gates of Dacot. Making himself a small bowl of leftover potatoes and chimtny root. He sat down to eat and watched as a neighbor walked past the door. He looked about quickly and looked at the boy in such a way as to say follow me. Which Meirach did, not knowing what the man wanted. Looking around again to be sure no one was watching. “Thems took your Da‘,” the old man said, looking around again. “the quarta' mastah did. They was makin' a big racket thems was. 'Where is he? Where is the boy; the little street rat!' thems was yellin‘ all night. Couldn't hardly sleep from all the racket.” The man said with a look of loath. ” Came an' asked me questions an' all that, but I wouldn't tell em' a thing. Course thems tried to bribe me an' all, but I wouldn't have none of it.” the balding old man said. “Where did they take im'?” Meirach asked. When the man didn't say anything, he walked away, Frozen with shock. Fear began to shake Meirach as he realized that his father had saved him. He knew he had to hide, but it there was still much daylight left. He went to look for his father. Walking through the back streets and alleyways, Meirach slowly made his way through the city. The hours droned as he searched for his father. Turning a corner into a crowded marketplace he almost bumped into a guard. Slipping away from the misshapen guard darting under the chimtny stall nearby. Moving quickly under the next only half hearing the angry cries of the guard. Already to the end of the line of stalls, he paused under the last one. Hunger tore at his stomach as he realized his lack of breakfast and now lunch was approaching rapidly. Driven by hunger he reached out from under the wooden stall and grabbed the first thing he laid his hands on. Bringing his hand back he was stopped by a fat hand grabbing his. “What have we here?” the man at the stall said with little humor.“ well lad? What have you to say? Stealing from my store are you?” looking at him through large spectacles. By now the man had pulled Meirach from under the stall. Almost tearing it off in the process. Waiting for an answer from the boy, who stood, eyes lowered, rubbing his arm. “I'm sorry, mister, really I am.” Meirach said, “Its just, I'm so hungry. I haven't eaten since last night, and my da's been taken away” Man put his hand over the boys mouth. Looking around he pulled a string and the stall was closed. He pulled Meirach into his small clay room behind the stall. Pushing him onto a broken old stool. “What do yah mean your da's been taken away?” The man said in a harsh whisper. “ Who took ‘im?” Meirach let the fear of the man liquefy into need for comfort. Slowly he began his short tale, being careful to leave the embarrassment of the shop window out. By now the man had a mask of hope on his large oval face. And was looking through the cracks of the small boarded- up windows. He began to pace the small room, while Meirach sat and watched not sure what to do. He looked around the room, nothing of any importance, a few pots, fruit to replace the ones sold, a water jug, barrels of unknown content stood in the farther left hand corner next to the wooden door on the back wall, the curtain of a door at the front of the room leading to the fruit stall. A cough shook the boy from his thoughts, and he turned to the man and started to say something but was once again hushed. “Not here, boy.” the man said. With a slightly irritated look on his face. Meirach nodded his head, he didn't know who this man was but if he was going to harm him he would've by then. The man grabbed Meirach's hand, ”Follow close, boy. I'll not be slowed.” the man whispered through yellow teeth to the boy. They made their way out the door in the back of the room, down the alley turning every which way. Until finally they reached a set of stairs going down, The man followed the stairs until they came to a long, dark hallway, with many doors. Murmuring could be heard through the wooden doors, and an occasional shout, but none came into the hallway. They stopped at a wooden door not unlike the rest, but for a man standing guard outside. He stepped forward as they approached, obviously waiting for a password unknown to Meirach. But the man must've known, for the man stepped aside and they went through. Meirach didn't know what to make of the room he was in. nothing remarkable stood out to Meirach. A small table, laden with cheeses and fruits, sat in the middle with pillows surrounding it, in is the typical sophisticated way of the Nobles of Dacot. Looking at the man, who now sat behind the table, he stepped towards the table. Coming to a halt when he saw the large beast in the corner behind the man. “Come, come. He wont hurt yah.” the man said with a jovial look on his face. ”at least not until I tell 'im to.” the man laughed a hearty bellow of a laugh. ”Now, lets get to business. What of your da?” The boy gave a shrug. “ I don't know. I was lookin' for ‘im when your hand snatched mine.” Meirach stood looking at the food with a longing look, hoping the man would notice. “Well boy!, aint you gonna eat?!” the man said with a bemused look. “there's plenty here for ya” he said as he stuffed a large soft-roll into his mouth. Meirach started, still looking at the food. Wondering what to eat first. Then he noticed something about the man and the food. The man was only eating soft-rolls and soup. The boy didn't know why so he asked,” why don't you eat anything else?” the man gave him cursory glance, “ you know, why don't you eat the sweets or anything else” The man gave a hearty bellow of a laugh.” well my boy, don't you know the sweets are for dessert, and as for the rest, cant you see I don't have much teeth left?” With that the man gave a wide grin, which made his face look like a Cheshire cat. Meirach took a look into the man's gaping mouth. And sure enough the man was missing most of his molars on both side and the bottom, and a bicuspid on his lower right hand side. He nodded in acknowledgement and sat down. “Well boy, I don't think I've met you 'fore, what's your name?” he looked at the boy as if trying to read his mind. “ My name is Meirach. I just got it yesterday, at The Naming.” Meirach said, as he stuffed a spoon full of something he had never tasted into his watering mouth. His eyes wide with surprise, he began to shovel the food into his mouth like a person starved. the man just looked at him, a smile on his face. Meirach went for some of the xatha in a large jug on the end of the table and gulped it all within seconds. He paused, seemingly full. So the man said," The names Bross, short for Ambross but no one calls me that, got it?" Bross gave Meirach a look that told of many beatings, if he were to forget. The boy barly looked up from the food to give a short nod. "an' from now on your name is Weivv. got it?, they'll be lookin' for a boy named Meirach. and we dont want them to find one, now do we?" The boy gave a small look of wonder at the man he now knew to be Bross. He had loved his new name, Meirach, somehow it told of great wonders and danger to come. but Bross was right, they would be looking for him. and he definitely didn't want them to find him. so he would be Weivv for now. "Weivv" gave a short nod of agreement to Bross. Tweet
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