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Ahab's Whale (standard:poetry, 524 words) | |||
Author: Tom Soukup | Added: Jun 21 2003 | Views/Reads: 3599/2296 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Basically, this is a rhyming Cliff's Notes of Moby Dick. It's actually the lyrics to a song I wrote but I thought it made good reading too. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story But he knew his box wouldn't hit the rocks As it nudged against the shore He'd be safe inside where his spirit hides When the Pequod was no more. . The sun grew dim, the wind fell thin And the time just barely passed. Then Ahab held a gold doubloon And he nailed it to the mast. "He who finds the dreaded beast," He said as he caught my eye, "This treasure will be his to keep." And so I reckoned that it's mine. . 'Twas the scent of loam and the thoughts of home That swept the sulky sky. But my skin went cold if the truth be told When I saw the monster's eye. The sea was split into shreds of foam By the slash of a mighty tail And a hundred tons of devil's flesh That I knew was Ahab's whale. . Soon the crimson seas lapped upon our knees As our weapons took to flight. But the whale held fast to a steady course It had Ahab in its sight. And the Pequod broke like the fragile yolk Of the egg of a landside quail. If revenge was sought, it would ne'er be wrought At the expense of Ahab's whale. . Now the sea lay down to gentle swells My doubloon's in Davey's grasp. I sit as stone while I drift alone But my mind still holds the past. It's the sight of Ahab's lifeless form In the snarls of harpoon tails As he waved farewell and dove straight to hell On the back of his mighty whale. . And whaling still runs in my veins When the wind doth blow a gale And I'm on the quest 'til I've won a rest And I've found old Ahab's whale. Tweet
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