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The Maiden of Anjou (standard:romance, 1852 words) | |||
Author: empress | Added: Jan 19 2003 | Views/Reads: 3675/2463 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
She was a maiden, he was a visiting English Lord... | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story At the end of the passage were the upper rooms of the priest, and a spiral stairway that led to the sanctuary. Anacelle planned to light two candles for her parents. She wondered if uncle Jacques was happily married. No news came from him, either. Anacelle stopped walking in the middle of the passage and looked out one of the arched windows. A tear slipped unnoticed down her smooth cheek and fell. She was so lonely. The unhappy and yet beautiful girl stood alone on the crossway, which connected the chapel from the big, empty house where she lived. It was such a sad picture that anyone who saw it would feel the poignancy, the raw feeling of loneliness coming from the girl. Beneath her, a young man felt something wet fall on his head. Was it raining? He looked away from the two young women staring at him with unabashed admiration and looked up. To his surprise, he found himself staring at the bottom of a passageway connecting the chapel and the chƒteau, but she couldn't see if there was anyone on it. Lord Hans Milford Beckham of Brighthelmstone urged his horse forward, stopped ten feet away from where he had been and looked up at the passageway. There he saw the most beautiful young woman he had ever seen in his life. Hans was entranced. He couldn't look away from her. She had long, dark brown hair, braided in two sides and joined at the back of her head. She was wearing a plain white gown belted just below her waist with a gold sash. The dress was cut expertly, and it was obviously a dress made for gentry. He couldn't tell what color her eyes were, but he was sure he would find them; whatever color they were, beautiful. Then he saw her wipe her cheek with a small white handkerchief. Was she crying? Was it her teardrop what he felt on his head a while ago? He wished he could talk to her. Suddenly, a strong wind pushed her forward and he heard her gasp when her handkerchief was blown away. Hans watched the maiden reach out for it instinctively. His heart almost stopped when he thought she would fall, but she was able to keep her feet on the inside of the window. The white handkerchief floated down, and Hans immediately got off his horse. This scene was almost a repeat of the other maidens who "accidentally" dropped their white handkerchiefs. He wondered if this maiden was apt in the ways of the women at court, of if she knew of the ways of courtly love. He watched her as he walked to where the handkerchief had fallen. She was staring at it, and when he came to her line of vision, her beautiful eyes widened. It wasn't an act, he realized. She was staring at him in surprise, her pink lips forming an O. Hank was once again reminded of her beauty. She looked like an angel. A very surprised angel. Why, she was a blushing angel! He just couldn't resist. He winked at her. * * * Chapter Two Anacelle's heart banged against her chest. He had winked at her! She couldn't... oh dear he was... he was such an audacious man! Well, he was a handsome audacious young man! Oh dear Lord he really was such a... Her mind was scrambled and she could put any of her thoughts together form a single grammatically correct thought, not that she knew anything important about grammar. She was just a woman, after all. But he had winked at her! And... Oh my... he was... he CROOKED his finger at her and held up the handkerchief he had just plucked from the ground! Would she? Could she? Was it correct of her, proper if she went down and took it? Was there any harm in it? Mother used to talk about young men who couldn't control themselves and just... Oh she was just confused! Anacelle bit her lip. Oh God the man was now grinning at her. It was that a naughty, wicked grin if she ever saw one. And didn't his neck hurt from staring up at her all this time? Oh dear! She shook her head at him. He waggled his eyebrows at her. Oh my God! She whirled around and ran to the chapel, down the spiraled stairs, and exited though the main entrance. He was there, waiting for her. Anacelle came to a halt and stared at his feet. He stepped forward and looked down at her. "My lady?" He asked, making sure she was one. "Monsieur, I cannot speak in English," she said in French. Hans heard a giggle somewhere behind him, and the girl's head jerked up. She looked past his shoulder. He was looking intently at her face. She was even more beautiful up close. He wanted to... Her face suddenly reddened. He wondered if she had read his thoughts. He turned around to see what she was staring at. Those two girls who had been staring at him a while ago... A small hand grabbed at the handkerchief he was holding and snatched it away. Hans turned back to her, and saw her running inside the chapel and disappear inside. Damn it! He was about to follow when one of his men called out. He would find out who she was later. * * * Anacelle was still thinking about him that night, at the dinner table. Who was he? He was an Englishman! Of course, she realized that from his accent. What was he doing here? Surely if he was a guest her brother would have introduced him earlier. But Alessandro didn't introduce anyone to her that night. Who was he? "Alessandro, did you see those foreign men here this midday?" The words were out of her mouth before she could stop them. She felt her face getting warm, and she stared at the food on her plate. It was roast venison and hot potatoes. Tomorrow and the following two weeks they would be eating only fish and vegetables, for Holy Week was at hand. She planned to pray the rosary in the chapel three times a day. Mother said that if a person prayed the rosary three times a day everyday he would die peacefully. "You saw them?" Alessandro was looking at her. "Did they talk to you? They were here to see me but I wasn't here so I missed them." Anacelle chewed slowly before answering. "I... just saw them. They were Englishmen, I think." Alessandro looked interested. "I wonder what they want. They left late in the afternoon, with a message that said they would be back. I arrived here half an hour after they left. I wonder why they couldn't wait until supper time." A sense of disappointment settled on Anacelle, who tried to brush it away. What was wrong with her? Why was she sad they had left so early? "Do you think they are enemies, Alessandro?" "No. I don't know. I don't think so, if they are Englishmen. I have a friend among them, who was a friend of our father. A Lord Beckham, I think." "Oh." Anacelle shifted in her chair. Well, good. He wasn't an enemy; she at least had the consolation she wasn't cavorting with an enemy. And he would return, as her brother said. She thought about that handsome Englishman she spoke with earlier that day and smiled. She would see him again, she was sure of it. 9 Tweet
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