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Carnival Day For Ethan (standard:other, 1376 words) | |||
Author: Preston | Added: Jul 28 2002 | Views/Reads: 3248/2136 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Just one day in the life of Ethan Perry | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story day was not turning out to be the one which had been playing out in his mind for the past two weeks. As he exited the tent, Ethan heard the man start his excited speech again, or should it be pitch. He walked away feeling dismally cynical about the whole thing and afraid to try any of the other sideshows. A teenage boy and girl holding hands, laughing and having a good time, ran by knocking against Ethan. The boy whirled around and yelled half-hearted apologies but didn't stop. Crowded, yes, that's what was happening. The place was just getting too crowded. What a disappointment this day was turning out to be. For the next two and a half hours, Ethan walked around the carnival trying to find some satisfaction in it and to salvage something...anything...of this demurring day, but mostly he just watched others in perplexity at their apparent enjoyment when he could not find any. From motivation originating in his stomach, Ethan decided to spend his last two dollars at the hotdog stand. He waited a long dispirited time in the line, and when finally he got to the front, he laid his money on the counter and asked if he could have extra mustered on his hotdog, please. “That's not enough,” the woman said, rolling her eyes impatiently. She spread the bills apart on the ledge. “You need fifty cents, more. Hotdogs are two-fifty.” “Two-fifty?” Ethan asked in wonderment. That was incredibly a high price for a hotdog. “I only have two dollars.” “Yes you do,” she said without a doubt. “Don't you have another fifty cents?” “No. I spent it all on stuff, here. I don't have anymore money.” “Well, I'm sorry but that's nothing to me and I can't help you if you don't have enough money,” she said, not doing a very good job of pretending to care. “Can I help the next person in line?” Ethan left the carnival to wait for the bus which had transported him and others here earlier to return. He was not the only one to come out and wait for the bus, others were beginning to gather into a sizable group. Most had smiles on their faces having enjoyed themselves, but some did not. Ethan was one of those disillusioned ones. Finally, and with merciful promptness, the bus came and parked close to the entrance. This was the prearranged time for the bus to return and it was not late. A woman climbed down from the bus. She was Sophie Jamison. Sophie was not just in charge of the bus, but she was the coordinator of the home where Ethan lived. “Come along, now, quickly,” she said clapping her hands together, “we don't want to linger too long here at the entrance and cause problems. Get on the bus as quickly as possible.” The group of people, including Ethan, dutifully complied the best they could, but aging people rarely moved swiftly by anyone's standard. Still, the task was completed reasonably quick. Ethan sat looking through moist eyes at the carnival and the young people who remained there as the bus pulled away. Maybe they found more there than he had. At any rate, he was exhausted and eager to get back to the familiar surroundings and his comforting room. Ethan reclined his head and closed his tired eyes. The day wasn't all bad, he decided at length, at least it held more adventure than he had known in a great long time. He would have to do it again the next chance he got. END NOTE: When you go to a carnival, fair, amusement park, museum or anywhere else people go to enjoy themselves, to get away from the labors of life, look around, Ethan will be there. You will know him when you see him. Tweet
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