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Long-time Friends (standard:romance, 1550 words) | |||
Author: K. A. Joyce | Added: Jun 10 2002 | Views/Reads: 3423/2287 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Highschool sweethearts perhaps? (Incomplete) This is a story i started writing a long time ago. Any feedback is welcome, as are ideas on how i could continue it... | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story "What? James, are you saying you wrote this? Why couldn't you have just gotten Brad to tell me to meet you somewhere rather then writing the note?" I looked at him, having no clue as to what he was up to. He laughed, "Well I thought this was a little bit more mysterious and I didn't want you to know who it was, but I thought you might have been able to guess. Look at the time, that's when I had PCM this morning." I looked at the time printed on the sheet, it was indeed during James' PCM class. He still hadn't explained why he'd written the note, or why he had wanted to meet me here. I smiled, "Well it certainly had me wondering. And it also means I have you to thank for getting me into trouble when I turned around to find my mystery letter sender. So," I looked at my watch, "it is now 1:20 and I still don't know what I'm doing here, want to fill me in or what?" He looked down at his feet, as though he had all of a sudden become shy around me. I smiled, "Come on James." "Well, I was just wondering if maybe, umm, if perhaps you would like to, uh, hmm." "Oh come on James, if I would like to what?" I said staring at him now. "If you would perhaps like to go out with me sometime, like on a date?" He was looking at me now. I smiled and threw my arms around his neck, almost knocking him off balance. "I'd love to," I said in his ear. Then picked up my stuff and headed back down into the schoolyard. "Bec!" I turned around, " Don't say anything yet okay?" I nodded, smiled and turned around again, feeling better than I had in ages. I had wanted for so long to "go out" with James, and now he had asked me, I couldn't believe it! The rest of Friday afternoon went by in a bit of a blur, I was really quite happy and had a hard time not telling my friends why, I said it was because it was Friday and I was looking forward to the weekend, which was true. The last bell went and I think I was first out the door and on my way down to the bus stop. I saw James waiting in our usual spot for the rest of the gang and I couldn't help smiling, he was smiling back and looked about as happy as I was. It was weird really, we'd been friends for so long, but now we were more than that, and happier about it to! "Hey, How was your afternoon?" I asked as the other bus students started to make their way down to the bus stop. "A total bludge, yours?" He said. I giggled, "The same pretty much." "So, what you up to this avo Bec?" James asked, a smile on his face. I couldn't help laughing, "I don't know, but I have a feeling you do, wanna tell me what you have in mind?" He put a look of serious thought on his face, "Umm, nope, I don't think so!" For that I hit him and we both started laughing. We were still laughing when Jo and Kris finally made their way down to where we stood. "Hey you two, what's so funny?" I was still laughing, "Nothing Jo, James' was just being stupid." And with that James kicked me, I gave him an evil look and slapped him back. "So Bec, how was soccer training at lunch? Any good looking guys playing this year?" Jo was always on the outlook for some gorgeous sporty types to prey on, but it was fun. I giggled, "Oh yeah, there were a few about. And boy did they look good in those tight shorts." We both burst out laughing. I sneaked a look at James, he was smiling, which was good, I didn't won't to ruin my chances with him already! Friday afternoons were when our gang would usually head off to the shops after school and just hang out. Today tho, Jo had an appointment and Sara was visiting her grandfather in hospital so it was just James and I. Jo got off at her stop and I called out to her to call me on the weekend. "So," I said to James when I'd got myself fully back in the bus, "what we up to this avo?" "Hmm, let me see. How about dinner and a movie?" "Serious? I'd love to, but I'll have to call mum," I looked down at my school uniform and giggled, " and get changed first!" "Oh I dunno, I think you look rather sexy in that uniform," James smiled. I smiled, "Do you now? Well, guess its just as well I have to wear it everyday then." James' tried to hit me and I ducked. As I did so I lost my balance and James' grabbed me round the waist. "Thanks," I said breathlessly. I leant back into his embrace, with no intention of moving from it. Tweet
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