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Man of the Sea (standard:drama, 1893 words) | |||
Author: Joe Edwardson | Added: Feb 24 2002 | Views/Reads: 3396/2471 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A young naive sailor goes through the sudden rise and deadly fall of superstardom. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story though I’m not an expert and won’t be able to fix it for you. You can just follow me to shore though.” “That’d be great. Thank you very much. My name is Ron, by the way, and my friend’s name is Susan. What’s yours?” “Shawn.” “Oh,” Ron thinks for a moment, “that’s a great name.” Ron and Susan followed Shawn to harbor at the California Coast. They all get out of their boats to talk for a short while, but that short while turns into something not so short at all. Ron and Susan invite Shawn to eat breakfast with them. “Shawn, we’ll get right to the point. We have kind of an offer for you,” says Ron. “We’re two of the heads of scouting for the Vamouse International Modeling Agency, and we think you have an incredible look. We’re not guaranteeing anything, but we’d like you to come in for some test shots to see what kind of potential you might have in our company,” Susan elaborates. Shawn looks from Susan to Ron and back and forth again a couple times, with his mouth hanging wide open. “Are you serious?” Ron replies, “Yes, we’re serious, but we don’t want to get your hopes up if it’s something you’re interested in. We meet countless people and ask them to come in for test shots.” Susan chimes in, “But Shawn, seriously, I think you might be something special. I have an eye for these types of things, and when I first saw you, I just knew it. You could be the next Marcus Shankenberg.” “Who?” Shawn meekly asks. “Never mind. Are you in or out?” asks Ron. “Um, well, yeah. I guess it wouldn’t hurt to give it a shot,” replies Shawn, sealing his fate. “Great. Let’s do this right away!” Susan proudly declares. And thus began the life of male model Shawn. Shawn was on all the magazine covers: GQ, Vogue, Seventeen, Glamour, Amateur Sailor, and many more all within the first six months. He was a hit. He was the face of the new millennium. All the girls swooned over Shawn and all the boys wanted to be like Shawn. And he was known simply as Shawn. “This is so amazing. I never knew I looked so good in short hair! I wish they would have found me earlier. This is the life, Charles. This is the life,” hit supermodel sensation Shawn says to his hairdresser as he’s being made over for his most recent photo shoot while staring in the vanity mirror and running his hands through his new short cropped frosted tip hairdo. “No, this is the life, Shawny boy. I just love working with your hair. All you need is a teensy bit more gel in a couple areas and we’ll be done,” replies Charles. Susan, sporting a brand new designer velvet overcoat, covering various other brand new designer articles of clothing, enters Shawn’s dressing room, gives him a big smile and hug, and checks out her new diamond earrings in the mirror. “How’s the superstar doing today?” she asks. “I’m quite good. I don’t know if I’m quite a superstar yet. . .but you know I’m getting there!” replies Shawn, followed by a hearty laugh. “There actually might be a small little problem though,” Susan says slightly apprehensively. “The latest street polls are coming in from our various locations and it looks like Shawn’s favor with males is slipping slightly. This doesn’t bode well for the chances of our Shawn: the Sitcom pilot being picked up by ABC unless we quickly turn it around.” “Oh no. That’s not good at all. What are we going to do?” replies Shawn to the bad info. “I’m going to discuss it with Ron over dinner tonight. I’ll tell you about our ideas tomorrow,” says Susan. “Oh. Okay,” Shawn meekly says. “Um, you’re welcome to join us if you’d like. I didn’t think you’d be interested,” Susan quickly recovers. “No, no, I was going to go to the docks tonight to reminisce. Catch up on all the old smells,” says Shawn. Shawn and Susan end their conversation and the hard working hairdressers and make-up artists finish their job on Shawn. After the photo shoot at around 2:00 a.m., Shawn, clothed in the snappy duds of his new favorite designer, takes a walk down the docks he used to frequent during his days as a sailor. He turns his nose at the rancid smell of fish guts and mumbles, “How could I have ever stood that stuff?” Shawn continues down the docks until he gets to the end where a dozen or so sailors and fishermen have gathered to socialize. “The bars must have just closed, I see,” says Shawn inaudibly as he passes the men without looking any of them in the eye. “Shawn!” “Hey Shawn!” Two deep men’s angry voices twist Shawn’s eardrums around, forcing him to turn to greet them. After a couple seconds, he recognizes them as the Philips brothers, two fishermen he was once acquainted with. They approach Shawn, stumbling slightly as it was indeed only a half hour after the bars closed, and look him up and down. “Those are some really nice clothes, Shawn,” one says. “It’s nice to see that you’ve made yourself a better person,” says the other, pseudo-jokingly. The brothers invite Shawn back to their boat to catch up on old times. Shawn feels uneasy about it and would like to go home to check his messages, but he decides to go with as to not be rude. One brother cranks up the motor and they head off into the ocean, which throws Shawn off balance. “Where are we going?” Shawn asks. “Just for a little ride,” one replies. Shawn anxiously awaited the motor to be switched off and for anchor to be dropped, but he kept waiting and waiting and waiting. Finally his nails were bitten down to the skin and he got up to ask where exactly they were going, when the motor stopped. The three men hadn’t said a word in the last fifteen minutes and no words were needed. The Philips brothers nodded to each other and simultaneously threw rabid vicious rights, lefts, forearms, and elbows into the eyes of Shawn. He immediately fell to the ground and tried to protect his million-dollar face, but they attacked his ribs and torso. They had 2x4’s as well that they used against Shawn, sending them crashing down on his head, back, legs, and side. After a final couple more minutes of beatings, they picked the semi-conscious Shawn into the air and dropped him over the side of the sailboat, feeding him to the sea. Tweet
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