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Fanfare for the Common Man (standard:other, 0 words) | |||
Author: The Dark Master | Added: Jun 14 2001 | Views/Reads: 3288/2219 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
One day that changed everything for a Romanian coal miner. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story of dirt that dotted the landscape like shallow graves in a Titan's cemetery. Nicolae closed his eyes, trying to steady his thoughts. After all, it was only human to hate someone. A few moments later, the bus pulled into the yard of the industrial complex. Nicolae got off the bus and joined up with Ion and some of his other buddies. Then together, the mass of men moved towards the Company office, stamped their time cards, and then filed off to the elevator entrance. A squeal of metal increasing in intensity sounded the approach of the elevator and seconds later, a steel cage rose to the surface. The front metal grid slid open and a group of twenty men walked out, their red, irritated eyes forming a stark contrast with their black, coal dust coated faces and bodies. Part of the night shift, Nicolae thought, before he, Ion, and eighteen others packed into the cage and began their descent into the bowels of the Earth. The men donned their helmets and watched the rock faces around them streaming upward. Minutes later, the car stopped twenty-five hundred feet below the surface of the Earth. Twenty-five hundred feet below Brasov, twenty-five hundred feet below Elena, thought Nicolae. The metal gate opened and the men spanned out, weaving past heavy iron railcars and machinery on the way to their posts. Nicolae and Ion learned that they would be working on the North Seam today, in the farthest reaches of the mine. They would be teamed up with Leon Szvenk's group on this one. Great, just great, thought Nicolae. Eugen was in Szvensk's group. Nicolae and Ion trudged down the rock hallways, past men furiously removing chunks of the rock face with their jackhammers and hydraulic tools. It took what seemed like hours for the two men to reach their post. The thought of having to work side by side with this man infuriated Nicolae. He picked up his jackhammer, turned on the compressed air flow, and began to attack the rock face with a vengeance, grinding his teeth angrily. Eugen showed up with the rest of Szensk's crew a half an hour later and purposefully set to work right beside Nicolae. Both men wore earplugs to protect themselves from the painful din of the machinery, but they could mentally hear the silent curses that were being thrown between them. Work went on and the crews filled the motorized iron railcars high with anthracite. The filled cars would disappear only to be replaced by an unending stream of empty ones. A fog of coal dust hung in the shaft, waiting to settle on the ground or deep in the men's lungs. A water cannon was brought in and the walls were washed clean, the chunks of coal that hadn't been gathered, now flowing down the shaft to be pumped to the surface and processed. At 11:30 a.m., a bell sounded, its harsh call echoing down the busy shafts. Nicolae tipped his hat up and washed off his face with a hose. The cold water felt so good against his sweltering brow. He wiped his wet face with his hand and looked at it; his ungloved hand was now dripping with foul black water. From deep inside his jacket, Nicolae removed his handkerchief and blew his nose. A layer of ebony mucous covered the cloth and the man folded it up and put it back inside his jacket. Eugen approached him. "So Antenescu, here we are again. Let me ask you, why do you think your wife was interested in me," Eugen questioned coyly. "Prick...," said Nicolae as he shifted his gaze from his rival to the sandwich in metal lunchbox. "Come on, sometimes we just have to accept the fact that women make the wrong decisions in their choice of husbands," chuckled Eugen. Nicolae's hand groped for the sharp chisel next to him and could feel the hard composite grip in his rough hands. Nicolae smiled to himself and thought about how good it would feel to slam the sharp mining utensil deep into Eugen's skull, to see the look of shock register on his adversary's face as the blade tunneled deep into his cerebral cortex. Eugen's eyes opened wide in fright as he saw Nicolae grab the chisel, his knuckles white with pressure. Eugen snapped to his feet, his ugly sneer wiped from his face, replaced with a mask of sheer terror. It was beautiful, thought Nicolae. The biggest asshole in town would come to the end of the line. Chisel in hand, Nicolae swung at Eugen. The fat man ducked and slammed his fist into Nicolae's stomach. Nicolae groaned and staggered backwards from the force of the blow but regained his feet and advanced upon his foe. It was only he and Eugen now, the rest of the men had migrated away to a central area to eat their lunches. Eugen looked stunned. He was surprised that his lean rival could absorb such a blow. "You've dug your own grave, Dzherinscu. You haven't realized that, have you?" Nicolae hissed. Eugen's eyes were like small, burning embers and his body trembled with rage and fright. His teeth were clenched and his fists were molded into tight balls. He did not reply. "I'm doing both you and this town a favor, you rotten bastard," bellowed Nicolae as he raised his weapon above his head, preparing to take his revenge. At the moment that his vengeance was to have been carried out, there was a crack, a terrible crack, and both men instinctively looked up. Both sets of eyes instantly darted to the wooden support beams above them. They were long overdue for replacement with new hydraulic supports that had been installed in many of Romania's mines. Just as suddenly, the wooden supports in the mine shaft gave way and a mountain of rock came rumbling down upon them with an ear-splitting crash. Something hard and heavy smashed onto Nicolae's helmet, knocking him to the ground. Moments later, he regained his feet and looked around, dazed. His hand instinctively went to his helmet lantern to turn on the light. A focused beam of incandescent light cut through the thick curtain of dust to reveal a large heap of rubble where Eugen had been standing. He turned around, looked to the other end of the shaft and noticed that it was still intact. His exit would be unhindered. Nicolae turned again and looked at the pile of debris. He could hear a faint moaning from beneath it. Eugen, thought Nicolae. Eugen was still down there and alive at that. The thought that maybe Eugen got what was coming to him flashed through his mind. Nicolae knew that Eugen wouldn't last for long without air, and that by the time rescuers arrived, it would probably be too late. Thinking that maybe it was best that Nature finish what he had begun, Nicolae turned on his heels and began to walk down the path. He heard the cry again, this time much weaker. Nicolae's throat seemed to constrict and the muscles in his neck tensed. Stopping in his tracks, he slowly turned his head back to the rubble. Could he leave this man to die, to suffer? What would this really accomplish? Could he live with the knowledge that he had dispassionately let a man die when he could have intervened? What would his colleagues think of him? Nicolae rushed back to the pile of rubble and furiously began tearing at the loose rock with his bear hands. "I hate you, I hate you," screamed Nicolae as he scrambled to remove the ruins. His unprotected hands began to bleed as they hastily tore at the rocks. But Nicolae felt no pain, being in the grip of a powerful adrenaline rush. Pulling away pounds of rubble seemed no more physically taxing than scooping up sand at a playground. Nicolae could hear the moans getting stronger now and heard yells in the distance. "You son of a bitch, why am I doing this," cried Nicolae, his face now covered not only with sweat but tears. It seemed like an eternity, but Nicolae's hands finally uncovered the helmeted head of the man he so hated. He exposed Eugen's shoulders and with a loud grunt, heaved him from the rubble. He wiped the dust from Eugen's face and watched as the wounded man's mouth opened, gasping for air. Eugen opened his eyes and looked upward. He saw a man kneeling over him, a man with bloody, torn hands. From behind him, Eugen could hear booted feet running down the corridor. He looked up at Nicolae, the man whom he had tortured, the man who had almost killed him as Nicolae stared downwards at him. Eugen's mouth moved, but the phrase was inaudible. Words were not needed. Tweet
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