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Chickens (standard:Ghost stories, 1518 words) | |||
Author: Lev821 | Added: Apr 28 2022 | Views/Reads: 833/514 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This is why chickens should never play on railways. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story If you touch it you could die”. “That's the dare,” said Charlie, “if it was easy then it wouldn't be much of a dare. Stand in the middle of the tracks and wait for a train, then see how long you can stay there before you move”. “That's chicken,” said Kenneth, and a sense of fear swept through him before exiting, replaced by courage, by confidence to step up over the steel tracks to not lose face in front of his friend. “The other line,” said Charlie approaching the trackside. “The train on this one has just gone and might be ages before there's another one, so go on the other track”. “But that will mean the train comes out of the tunnel. I'm going to need more time to get out of the way”. He turned and walked back several metres. “Don't go too far back,” said Charlie, “you don't need all that length to get out of the way”. “Yes I do, probly more,” and he walked further. “No you don't!” said Charlie, “stop there, that's plenty of space”. Kenneth stopped and nodded, carefully stepping over the tracks to stand around thirty metres away, facing the darkness of the tunnel. “Now you just got to wait for the train,” said Charlie. So they stood there for a few moments, looking at the darkness, and Charlie went back to the undergrowth to explore. Kenneth felt the wind getting up slightly coming from the tunnel, and could hear a distant rumbling. “Tubby!” shouted Kenneth, but his friend was engrossed in trying to decide whether the blackberries he'd came across were edible. “Tubby!” Charlie's eyes widened and he ran back to the trackside, smiling at the tunnel. “Your turn after this,” said Kenneth. “What? no,” said Charlie. “I can't, we need to go in case the police come”. “No, it's your turn. Don't be chicken”. “I'm not a chicken! I can easy do it, but we need to go after this cos' the poli...” “You're a chicken!” Kenneth shouted, pointing at him. “I'm not!” Charlie shouted back, and the wind from the tunnel grew more forceful over the boys, and Kenneth looked back into the darkness, bracing himself for the train, only for something within the tunnel to catch his eye. Something which slowly emerged to walk and stop at the entrance. It was another schoolboy. He seemed around the same age, had birds nest blonde hair in a different school's uniform that looked old and worn. It almost seemed as if he had stepped out of a photograph years past, and he was slightly transparent. Charlie was staring at him, unsure how to react. Then lights lit the tunnel up, and the train thundered out. Charlie watched as Kenneth was struck by the powerful vehicle. The driver slammed on the brakes, but the train would not stop for a while yet, and its last carriage had gone beyond the bend, out of sight. Yet, there was Kenneth, standing exactly where he was. The boy came further out, and stood by him. Charlie noticed that he could see through both boys. “Sorry,” the new boy said, “but I don't see many people. This tunnel keeps me here. Ties me to where I died. Like it will you. I did it because it gets lonely down here, and you're a like me. A schoolboy. I only wanted a friend”. Kenneth knew what had happened. His sense of shock had been taken with the train. It seemed shock and surprise at dying did not continue beyond, and his soul was left with a sense of calm. Of acceptance. He looked at Charlie, and drifted slowly across to him, who still had shock and fear, and wide eyes with a complete lack of comprehension that his young mind could not understand. “Sorry Tubby, you're not a chicken. You're a good...” but then the whirling cogs racing in Charlie's mind stopped, and locked into place. He screamed, turned, and ran as fast as he could away, until he came across the train, which had stopped, and the employees on that train were getting off. Charlie shouted and waved at them, running like he had never run before. “Bye mate,” Kenneth said, and drifted back to the schoolboy who said: “There'll be a lot more people around for a while,” Kenneth replied: “You just killed me so I could join you. How can I be your friend?” he then turned and drifted away. Only to get around five metres away before something stopped him, like trying to walk against powerful wind. The boy joined him. “It's the tunnel. It won't let us go”. The sense of acceptance that Kenneth had then intensified. He knew there was nothing he could do, and could see the boy was genuinely sorry. He just wanted company. Just a schoolboy like him, and schoolboys did stupid things like play chicken on railways. Kenneth nodded. “Okay,” he said, and they both drifted into the darkness of the tunnel. Tweet
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