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The sunseeker (standard:travel stories, 1902 words) | |||
Author: Lev821 | Added: Feb 22 2017 | Views/Reads: 2172/1482 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Everywhere they go, the same tourist shows up. Who is he? | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story away from a harbour, and there he was, on the shore, standing amongst those waving at people on the ship, but he wasn't waving, and Jaqueline guessed he was looking directly at them. Without answers, they knew they had to accept that he would be there at some point, and wondered if they should approach him at all. Keith decided that he would try and find out who he was, and when they were on their next holiday in China, they were standing at Guangzhou's pearl river dock, waiting to board the overnight boat to Wuzhou when out there on the river, a man was driving a dinghy, with one passenger, with his yellow hawaiian shirt and mirrored sunglasses. Keith knew there was no way to talk to him, as the boat disappeared away beyond the corner of a small building, and he knew he wouldn't see him again until the next holiday. Soon after they had arrived at Ivato international airport in Madagascar, they had taken a taxi to their hotel, and halfway there Keith had spotted the tourist simply walking along the pavement. 'Stop' he had said 'Stop the car,' the driver looking confused, yet the car was going slow enough to simply get out anyway, which is what Keith did, much to Jaqueline's surprise. The driver was surprised also, thinking he was trying to get away without paying, and got out of the car himself and started shouting at Keith who was standing in the middle of the road, trying to see the tourist who had gone, vanished into the streets. A couple of vehicles beeped their horns and Keith sheepishly made his way back into the taxi with an annoyed driver, knowing that for the duration of that holiday, he wouldn't see the tourist again. For their next excursion, warm clothes was the order of the day as they headed up into the Arctic for an icebreaker cruiseship tour in the seas of Greenland, and in the middle of their ten day trip they stopped to walk one mile across the ice towards a designated wildlife viewing spot, overlooking the sea, where several chairs had been laid out and guides would talk to them about the animals. There may be seals that would come and say hello, and perhaps a few Beluga whales entertaining them as the cameras clicked away. However, on this particular trip, as they were heading towards the viewing spot, icy snowy wind began to make an appearance, so much so that it made the people in front of them hard to see, but they saw enough that as the other people disappeared from view, they didn't seem to acknowledge the intensifying weather, yet it was enough for Keith and Jaqueline to stop. Through the blizzard, he emerged, still in his hawaiian shirt with his sunglasses and flip-flops. The storm didn't seem to be affecting him at all. Keith and Jaqueline just stared at him. He then turned and walked back, stopping a little further ahead to check if they would follow. Keith and Jaqueline looked at each other, then at him, then began to walk towards him. The man walked deeper on into the icy storm. The blizzard seemed to get worse but they ploughed on through, the tourist stopping every now and then to look back at them, until after around ten minutes the large looming maw of an ice cave emerged in front of them. They watched as the tourist disappeared into it, and followed him. They came out of the icy wind, the snow howling past the entrance and looked at each other again as if the other had answers to unasked questions. Jaqueline shrugged and walked into the cave. It wasn't dark, the walls were icy blue, glistening, and they only walked in around forty metres to find not the tourist, but an elderly man, sitting on a rocking chair, staring at them. They could hear the storm outside and they could hear the slow squeaking of the chair. "Mr Shaw" said Keith. The man just looked at them, a look of disappointment on his face, in his wrinkled brown suit. "Befrienders" said the man, standing up. He slowly slid forward, and they saw his eyes were black, his mouth opening wider than normal for nothing to emerge. He raised his arms towards them, but Keith and Jaqueline saw that they had turned into snakes, writhing pythons, and it was too late to turn and run when the snakes sunk their fangs into their throats. Venom, or some kind of fluid flowed into their bloodstreams, and when it found its way into their brains the vision came like a kaleidoscopic avalanche. Mr Shaw, sitting in his rocking chair in his care home, turning to look at the couple who volunteered for a local charity where they would go around to various institutions and befriend people who had no-one, no family, no friends, no-one but their own reflections. When they befriended Mr Shaw, they discovered he was a rather wealthy man, making his money from the import/export of copper and aluminium, and began to neglect their duties elsewhere and focus their attention on him, as he had nobody to leave his money to. That was, until he made two new friends. When he passed, Mr Shaw had left all his 24 million to Jaqueline and Keith who did not hesitate to use it for holidays, which would have been fine, however, but upon his passing into the after-life, Mr Shaw discovered they were not real friends at all, they were just befriending him for his money. Could he forgive them though? he had asked himself. It was a question he did not have an answer to because he could not decide, so over the years he began to appear to them as a tourist as he was his younger days, trying to work it out. In the ice cave in the arctic, he made his decision. Unconciousness swept over them and they collapsed to the floor. After a few moments they awoke, as though they had been asleep for days. Mr Shaw had gone, the rocking chair had gone. The ice cave was normal. They both stood up and looked at each other. There was nothing to say. They knew they would never see the tourist again, except perhaps when in the after-life themselves, but until then, he would not disturb them. They made their way slowly out of the ice cave. The blizzard had gone, and the sky was clear blue. Yet, on the ground around four metres ahead, there was a snake, curled up, looking at them. It uncurled itself by sliding away to the left, slowly, because written on the serpent in bold white lettering was the word: 'FORGIVEN'. Keith and Jaqeline stood there for a few moments, watching as it vanished into the distance. "Shall we get back to the group?" asked Jaqueline quietly. Keith nodded. "Yes". They walked slowly back, and found that time had hardly passed at all, rejoining the group as normal, nobody having noticed them missing. They sat in the chairs to watch the wildlife that decided to show themselves as the guide talked his rhetoric. Keith and Jaqueline just looked and smiled at each other, Jaqueline resting her head on Keith's shoulder, holding gloved hands. Tweet
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